Tell me what you think of my essay for Nursing Scool PLZZZ?

You do not need to capitalize nurse when not using it as a proper noun. Also, you are using "entites" wrong (entails?); some of your sentence are too slang (" what really stuck out"); there are also some wrong tense changes ("being that this")-that whole second sentence (paragraph 2) IS NOT GRAMMATICALLY correct (sorry I hit caps by accident--i am not yelling). Also delete all the personal stuff in paragraph 2 about the name, cuteness etc; you can say that the baby was names for the RN (but I would not put in the actual name). Rework paragraph 3; it is awkward & trite. Good luck on your future career!!